Reviews for Less Than A Hundred Days of Summer |
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![]() ![]() I really wanted Angie to kiss Tae Soo. I know it is innapropriate, but he would not remmember it the next day anyway. It would be a short and sweet kiss, and then Tae Soo would fall asleep with a cute smile on his face. |
![]() ![]() Shklovsky is the secret weapon for both both Tae Soo and Giselle. He is the one that has the power of getting them together, or keeping them apart. The little hairy dude has a lot of time to be in the middle of this whole affair! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow,really enjoyed it,i think things are getting heated up now,they will soon be together for sure,MY DOVEY DOVEY LOVEBIRDS,tae soo shi-giselle |
![]() ![]() I never thought I would say this, but Tae Soo is a very sad drunk. At least Giselle drinks with a friend. Hopefully they get together to drink together |
![]() ![]() ![]() BOOHOO HOO! That's the crying me. Still, I am glad that now Ms. Angie is aware of the situation... a little better, and I'm glad that she stopped him from doing something really stupid. Good for her. Anyways, I am anxious for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right. He has a (drunken) vision of love and she confides her feelings to an appliance. Niiice. It's an understatement to say they (still) miss each other. They crave with all their might, to the point of no return. There's a big NO to them not meeting and dealing with the crashing feelings of lust and love that where (finally) set free and now are taking the toll. All in all, things are going up for them. And in the same direction. Let's see how much more it takes to cross ways and be done with it. The motivation is there, the means (appear to be) in handy, what next? Let's cheer these two. |
![]() ![]() It has," she responded in liking. This sentence does not make sense. |
![]() ![]() It is okay that she got married and divorced but I did not like it that he got married too, had a son and got a divorce. I found that a bit disturbing that he would do that. Marry someone that he maybe did not love since he divorced and even after a son, he did not keep the marriage together or seem to care enough for his son. That is my opinion. However, you are the story teller so it is your call :-) |
![]() ![]() I agreed with the rest that no additional sentence in necessary. I got it that it was 10 years later but I was shocked as the rest that it took so long for them to meet again. I thought it would be sooner. So sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep posting,i think i‘ll have to sue for any failure to post,love rings |
![]() ![]() Finally, some positive action from both parties. Lets hope this time they get their acts together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Satisfaction! They're finally thinking... the both of them, and it was a good place to end a chapter. A natural pause... no more of this cliff hanger stuff! Don't like it. Still, I am really looking forward to the reconceliation chapter. I think it's worth having things out in the open. So, don't leave me in too much suspense! Chebal! |
![]() ![]() This is such a lovely and well written chapter. I love it! Clumsy Giselle spilling coffee all over, and fumbling all over. Tae Soo running all over town to find Giselle, and him meeting the cougar. As always this is a very funny and entertaining chapter. I already think that Puerto Rico was so far away in the past, it does seem like its been 10 years for me. That is because you have written this timeline and these characters so well, I really believe it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Almost there. But not quite. 100k words and their meeting again. A daunting task I'm sure, to pave the road (of their reunion) with good intentions gone... Wild. Or gone with the wind. Anyway, isn't that the road to hell? These two are going to set that hell on fire until they finally DO meet. They need to break free from that bad omen of it-shouldn't-be. Hurry up and decide what you want, you two! Stop playing purgatory games, it's not good for your love life. And (our) sanity. Here's to your inspiration and mercy, Mrs.. Author *frustrating sigh* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! You wrote another chapter? Wait! Did they finally meet an talk? No!? Oh... well I suppose that I have other things to do while you play with your poor characters. Maybe someone will call me and let me know when you get tired of playing puppet-master and finally post a chapter letting them meet (without hating each other). But then again, you seem to be having so much fun at our... ahem... I mean their expense. Yet I shall stick with you for another chapter, confident in the idea that all writers love their characters and want the best for them. Just teasing... well, sort of... |