|Reviews for Unfasten and Unloose|
| ZeeZeeBug101 chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
the first 6 lines were like listening to a poem outside on a windy day.
the feelings brushed past and they were so..there. and then they were gone with the last line.
something about the sunny day part seems so cliche that i honestly lost the connection i was feeling.
but great job on the beginning.
| Beccyluo chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
This poem is really good, it reminds me of a childhood friend who used to sing 'you're my sunshine' to me all the time. I don't think we really cherish our friends enough, until the day they are gone