Reviews for End
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
I loved this. I loved the third stanza, beautiful. I loved the descriptions of the patchwork quilt of leaves and the alliteration.
Vivechka chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
The second stanza is my favourite - the imagery used is just fantastic. I love how you've described such a mundane thing like a ring of coffee in such a poetic fashion!