Reviews for In the end, she loved him |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading it. I feel that the last part shouldn't be there. It disrupts the flow, in my opinion. And you shouldn't put down your writing. You should be confident in what you write. If you keep putting your writing down everyone else who reads it will think the same. And if you enjoy reading and writing Mythology, I have two on my page. (Just a suggestion.) But happy writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great poem! Loved it and hope you write more like this! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is definitely different than most poetry. I like the short, four line stanzas which each convey different details. The idea of the whole thing - bringing Greek mythology to the stage of poetry - was ingenious, while focusing on love which most people would not associate Persephone and Hades with. Bravo! -Warrior |