Reviews for Break My Heart
Phineas Angelo DeMayo chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
Wow. That's amazing. Really captures the emotion of something lime that.
Social Anxiety Lives chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Grade eight boys can be some of the worst to grade eight girls. I remember the heart troubles they caused me back in the day. As a teacher, I get to see these poor choices all over again. Kids can be cruel at this age. First two lines are very true. This young love is often influenced by friends. I wonder if the boy even knew or if the person in love just expected them to know. Chasing boys is also an emotional rollercoaster and a great deal of fun. I see that near the end you started to use punctuation. Not every poem has to follow the grammar rules. I would suggest removing all punctuation and just leave it be. You were just bursting with emotion at thirteen. I am curious about what new pieces you have been working on.