Reviews for Out of the Blue |
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![]() ![]() Love your work |
![]() ![]() Absolutely amazing story. It's taken me more than a few days but I've gotten to the end and I almost wish I hadn't, because I just didn't want it to end at all! I just loved it. As for a second story, I'd really love to read more about Hayden and her mystery boy, I'm dying to know who that is! And of course, more Trevor and Ever is always welcome. They're just too cute! Anyways, fantastic story and you should be very proud. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the fun facts bit! it's always interesting to hear about an author's writing process! Personally...I think the way you've ended the story is perfect. I'm not really the sequel type, and...truthfully...I hate putting couples through more trials and tribulations after the initial story...lol! I think it would be interesting to read Trevor's point of view, or Hayden's story. Of course, I'd be quite happy to have a story based on Matthew after the band get famous...it'd be nice to see his happy ending...and maybe even sneak in a scene where he attends his dear sister and best friend's wedding...hehe...At the same time, I would love to read something new altogether, haha! Also thanks for the playlist, there are lots of songs on there I am going to check out! I'd love to hear what you imagined Trevor to sound like...I wonder if it's close to what I thought! lol! Again, thanks for the amazing story, and I really can't wait to read what you come up with next! Andene xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was the perfect ending. Nothing forced about it... Sorry for taking so long...but I really wanted to enjoy the moment, and the wait was perfect for me. I love how you go through the time jump, explaining what's been going on since we last saw Ever and Trevor. It feels like a natural conclusion. I really liked reading about how her senior year went by, and how they spent their time apart. It's also great to hear about the gang and what they'll be up to. I'm glad Lindsay and Eric are still together, and Layla and Sam are cute too! I'm really glad she's getting along with both her parents. It must have been quite the transition but it's great she has both their love and support. Most of all, I loved how you described that feeling of being in love. It doesn't matter how much time has passed, but you still get nervous seeing that person and being with them...and how all you want is to spend as much time as you can with them. It was adorable how Trevor proposed to her in the cupcake shop, and really I agree that there is not other spot perfect for such an event than that shop. Everything really did come full circle, from the beginning of the story right until the end. I love how Trevor tells her that he's going to change her last name one final time. Anyway, I'm going to go fangirl in a corner...I really loved this story, and the end just leaves me joyful and yet sad...I want to cry haha...It was one of the best stories I've gotten to read, with all the rollercoaster emotions, and twists and turns, but I'm so glad you shared this! Amazing story! Well, I hope you'll keep writing and I can't wait for what you come up with next! Andene xx |
![]() ![]() Ohmygodd that was so amazing! And the ending was soo cute! :) |
![]() ![]() Hi! First of all congratulations for finishing Out of the Blue... is it normal to feel so chocked up after finishing a great story? Because i'm wishing that it never ends! I think you should write the story in Trev's POV whenver you get time... Be proud :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so crying right now. This story was so incredible and...I just can't believe it's over! I love TrEver and I am so adding this to my favorites :) thanks for the ride. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad I waited to read this entire story. I think you should do both a sequel to this and the same stories in Trevor's point of view. |
![]() ![]() Can't login at the moment, but... I loved it. I really did. It honestly made me sad that it's all over. Maybe a part two and a spin off for Hayden? That would be awesome :) Trevor and Ever are probably one of the best fictional romances on here. There's a few others that come close, but yeah. I must say, you did really good on this story, and I really hope to read more from you! So it took 3 years to finish - no biggy. It just means that your writing skills and techniques have developed even more so while writing this! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely chapter! I can't believe we're at the end...I'm going to cry... I've fallen in love with all your characters...especially Ever, Trevor, and Matthew. I'm going to miss them so much. The press conference was a really nice way to pull everything together. Although I think you may have given the paps far too much credit when it comes to self control! lol! There is so much I want to say...I just want to gush over this story...it's really captured my heart, and I'm unbelievably sad that it has one more chapter left. Thanks so much for coming up with such an amazing story. I can't wait to read the final chapter...although it will be bitter sweet...xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! I loved the humour of it all! I've got to say, Hayden is certainly a force to be reckoned with when it comes to the guys. I love how she's kind of like an army general, with the fear she's instilled in them using The juice. I was snickering about Matthew giving them up to save himself. It was so cute how Ever was hoping Trevor would take the bullet for her, and eventually Matthew had to as the older brother. So Cute! Personally...I think Hayden likes Matthew...but that is my bias towards Matthew speaking. She might just like Marshall instead, who sounds just as funny. I'm quite interested to have this particular secret revealed! lol! Ever's day out sounds like so much fun! I love Aladdin as well...the Genie is my favorite. I like how she and Adam are starting to build their relationship. I think it'll be interesting to see how both sets of parents work. I'm especially excited to hear about Adam and Emmalyn...they sound like an epic love. I can't wait for more! This is right up there with my favorite chapters! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is the perfect beginning to the chapter...it's just such a beautiful way to start things, and honestly, anyone who reads it I think can totally relate to the emotions. Not to take away from it...but I think you meant 'magnetic' and closer...in the first paragraph. Anyway, I love how Ever and Trevor are so in sync with each other, and the teasing was so cute. I'm going to fangirl at the end. I really enjoyed meeting Adam for the first time. And the whole blue box & Uncle Ben had me chuckling...it certainly sounds like something he'd do! lol! I'm really glad she's back with her family and the people that love her. I can't wait to read more! xx |
![]() ![]() You're doing a HUGE favour to mankind by posting this story... :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Ever is going to take it. Go Ever! Sorry couldn't resist saying that, but seriously I am going to se sad when this is all over. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eeee! I can't believe there's only one chapter left! |