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Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Aw man, I disappear for a while and find this story finished and removed. Well from what I did read you are a very talented writer :) . Good luck with everything
OddlyEmotional chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
What. The. Fuck.
Can you please email me the chapters unchanged, I need to finish reading them and also I swear I don't plagerize. I'm a somewhat writer, meaning, I'm writing but its kinda blank at the moment because I'm a oneshot writer and all and I would hete it if my work was plagerized. Moral of it all I really need to finish reading this, its like my drug and I just really,really, REALLY love this story. PLEASE I'm BEGGING YOU! * Pauses for a second and looks around. Drops painfully to knees and clasp hands together as in prayer* Like I said, IM BEGGING YOU!
CharlieJuliet chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
I love this chapter; very eventful. Drake came to the rescue, they're back in each others arms, they kissed (FINALLY!), and they were able to talk about their feelings (not yet the L word, but quite close). Oh, and Sakina get to see Drake naked O.O

Sigh. I'll really miss these two. The story is not yet finished but it's already in my most favorite stories of all time list.

Thank you for sharing this story to us. I'm really looking forward to someday getting my hands on the complete book.

[I had to post the review while logged out because I "already reviewed this chapter" says FictionPress]
CharlieJuliet chapter 2 . 7/27/2013
Thank you for being considerate enough to to at least give as the ending of an arc before deciding to pull it out.

It crossed my mind that this story is worth publishing NUMEROUS times when reading it. So I'm glad you're considering to publish it. You already have one sure buyer here. )
But please promise that if you do publish it, the book will also be sold in epub format and somewhere that accepts PayPal as a mode of payment. Meaning, not just Amazon. hehe. Sorry but I'm not a fan of kindle and I hate that they don't accept PayPal.

I have to say that I'm a bit sad I wouldn't be reading about Drake in a while ( But I'm excited with the idea of having a book filled with Drake adorableness D
I feel like a kid taking the marshmallow test. LOLZ!

I have an idea that just came into mind. Another thing I love about this story are the quotes you put at the start of every chapter. They are so funny they literally make me laugh out loud. So why don't you write 'The Book of the Drakón' and 'The Dragon's Guide to Humans' after you finish the story. You know, like what Rowling did with 'Quidditch Through the Ages' and 'Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them'. It will be fun if you do that D

And last, do you have Twitter where we can follow you to get updates about the progress of the book?
PertuzD chapter 2 . 7/26/2013
Why?! It ended! And it was awesome!

Nah, it was pretty, well-written, cute, and simply wonderful. If you will indeed publish it, I'd be one of the first buyers! I think the charm to this story is that it's kind of cliche, but it's also twisted at the same time, so it's awesome...you know, like something simple made complex, and I really like those types of stories. And it's kind of a fluffy romance, too, and that adds extra points

In any case, it was amazing, and I had a great time reading it. It does leave you questions to the imagination, but that can also be used as material for other stories, or books if you publish it. Really great idea if it works, precicely the reason I' writing this, to with you the best of lucks, overall with the wavering muse we call inspiration.

Anyways, bye, the best o lucks, and have no doubts on posting it here, we'll enjoy it nonetheless, )

Signed, PertuzD
The-Darkest-Blue chapter 2 . 7/26/2013
I saw the word removed in my fav's list and freaked out.

Thank god it was just editing

Please have a sequel :P
Moonlite 880 chapter 2 . 7/25/2013
If and when you publish can you please tell me the title so I can buy it? I would really love to read what you come up with.
WhiteWolfAsoka chapter 2 . 7/25/2013
Okay, um, this review I guess is going to have to be quite early I guess because I can't read the rest of the story from Chapter 12 because it was just taken down. Can you imagine how frustrated it is to be reading something and then not able to read the rest of it when only just last half-way through? I feel uprooted. o_o

Anyways, this story's so flippin' epic. I can not een fathom how much it is. Then again that could just be my inner fan-girl talking because I love dragons and anything, really, archaic. I want to read more so much I feel like I've all of a sudden turned into a rapid raccoon. I think all the reactions by both characters were reasonable, considering the plot and how dragons and humans run themselves.

Hope the editing will be done soon so I can read the rest of the story... :C
Selice chapter 18 . 7/24/2013
This was beautiful and a lovely way to end it. Thank you for writing it. It has given me great pleasure, especially over the past few days - my family is going thru a very tough time with a very much beloved loved one, and it has given me a smile amidst all the bad news.
Amelia chapter 17 . 7/24/2013
Love this book man
mylittleprincess chapter 17 . 7/24/2013
awesome story!
HeyAna chapter 18 . 7/24/2013
Wow, well I do feel a bit disappointed but it's alright, if you do rearrange and publish it then I wish you all the luck in the world and I'll hope to find it someday in a store and buy it :) It's a very good story and I do wish you to be able to publish it.

I guess this might be my last review then...

Lana the Redhead signs out
XDXP chapter 18 . 7/24/2013
Hey! I think the story was great!

Good luck to trying to get published :)
Death's Champion chapter 18 . 7/24/2013
Well, if you ever do plan on publishing this story, tell us and I'll keep my eyes peeled for it.
SweetCheeks22 chapter 18 . 7/24/2013
Then i am looking forward to seeing this story in stores. And, if you get lucky, as a movie :D
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