Reviews for Him
Me chapter 9 . 2/19/2014
Beautiful. Just...beautiful.
N.D.Iverson chapter 9 . 5/29/2013
I have never gotten into the whole 'slenderman' thing but I have to say this collection of mini-stories definitely put goosebumps on my arms and geared me up towards some nightmares tonight. To that I have one thing to say: Well played sir, well played...
Guest chapter 2 . 5/15/2013
Slenderman is scary as hell! Great story!
CatAndCrow chapter 9 . 5/16/2013
H... holy shit... Holy shit! Whoa! That was beautifully horrific! I absolutely loved your style of description and writing through first person; it's lovely. I am so gleeful to see such awesome writing like this! I can't find enough of this type of writing, so I thank you for posting this beauty of trepidation on this site for all to see.
CAC
Mar Qaroll chapter 9 . 5/15/2013
...I thought of his tentacles doing something like this, too. Interesting...

...Oh, but to read it from someone else's mind...Ah. Like minds think alike, eh...

This is one of my favorites.
Mar Qaroll chapter 8 . 5/15/2013
I see. This is an exciting, and new, scenario. The end, rather sad, but, of course, there was no way to escape him.

I'm enjoying this more than I should...
Mar Qaroll chapter 7 . 5/15/2013
Again, these damned windows. Was this in the MH videos or something? I don't watch those. They're not as entertaining as I desire...except when HE shows up...
Mar Qaroll chapter 6 . 5/15/2013
Fuck. Two things I've suffered with since *I* was a child.

1. Sleep paralysis. I really shouldn't be reading these Slenderman stories...
When I was younger, my sleep paralysis was bad, yes, but I never, EVER had my eyes open. But that's fine. The sensation of coldness, despite being under my sheets or blanket, and the dreadful feeling of something WATCHING me...
I still truly believe something is watching me. Thing is, I've only seen them in dreams and out of the corner of my eyes...

2. Tree outside the fucking window. Never been the same since Poltergeist...

Finally. This is the second Slenderman story I've ever read that does justice to him. It. Whatever you want to call that thing...
Mar Qaroll chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
Darkly humorous, in a way. A sad, twisted and frightening sort of way. Very good. Very enjoyable, this one. The one-sided conversation and mental imagery it conjures...

*Whistles*
Mar Qaroll chapter 4 . 5/15/2013
...One thing about good old Slenderman is that I wonder if he'll make it harder for me to take my lovely strolls in the forest...
Mar Qaroll chapter 3 . 5/15/2013
GodDAMN.

Why the hell doesn't this have more reviews? That ending. I FELT the fear, the tension. The "why did I look up", "why did I look away?" Fantastic. Marvelously creepy.

And I had never heard of Graphomania or Hypergraphia. Learn something new every day, eh...
Mar Qaroll chapter 2 . 5/15/2013
The hell. This is a good chapter. I quite like it, in fact. Seems like a "guide" yet also...something more. This is the sort of chapter I'll read more than once because of the mental imagery...and more.