|Reviews for shades|
| smokahontas shut down chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
This is quite a dark haiku - especially with the line "devoured by the dark" but it seems fitting because we associate spiders with the dark. I have to admit, this kinda creeps me out because I have a fear of spiders. But this haiku does have some stunning imagery and I can almost picture a spider's web being made. Great haiku as always.
| My.Writing.Is.My.Amulet chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Beautiful as always! :) I love the contrast in this haiku, the use of light and dark to conjure up realistic imagery. I also love the shift in tone, from "aroused" to "devoured", which gives you something to think about. Great work!