Reviews for The Pack
riverstardust chapter 3 . 5/19/2013
You said: "It was definitely not Jake's or my parents." for the scent part, then you have your character greeting Jake? o.o Im a little confused here. But awww the ending! D So sweet!
riverstardust chapter 2 . 5/19/2013
Can I ask how come only the teenagers are the wolfs? What happened to the adult wolves? Or maybe youll add that in later? ) I wonder if shes gonna be a part of them )
riverstardust chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
The personalities your characters have are quite clearly shown in this chapter ) I found it lacking description, but it was an interesting read )
The-Darkest-Blue chapter 7 . 5/19/2013

The-Darkest-Blue chapter 4 . 5/16/2013
yeah, i know u were busy! Stupid HS and darn projects. Le sigh. Nice chappy!

Keep on Writing my zombie lover friend,

Lara chapter 3 . 5/15/2013
I would love to read another chapter! it's so gripping! I want to read more! :P
The-Darkest-Blue chapter 3 . 5/15/2013



Keep Writing,

mistynight65 chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
your story is really good! keep it up it will get better
The-Darkest-Blue chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
Nice:D Update or fear death by zombies- jokes, you know what I mean since you know me