|Reviews for The Breakdown|
| Wondering Jew chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
I love the hurriedness and how well it represents the concept (also tibia and fibula from math class). But I think you should do something about the part set off by dashes. It interrupts the fast pace
| McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
How utterly wild and uniquely brilliant. I felt as I stepped into a whirlwind and kept confronting revelations I did & did not want to know. I have to catch my breath & read again! Do not stop this exquisite madness... It makes perfect sense!