Wow. This is amazing. I love it so much.

Wow. That's all I have to say. In a good way obviously :)

Oh god this was such a beautiful story. I really loved it and it was so original as well. Congrats on winning the ADOR contest! You deserved it :D

Congratulations- your one-shot won The Dive contest. With that, here’s the review:
Wow. Let me be honest- I saw the length of your one-shot, I was a little bit weary. I tend to get bored very quickly. But after I read the first few lines, I was hooked. I absolutely devoured your words. The one-shot was so well-written. The family descriptions were lovely; I could feel how much she loved them. When Louisa talks about being broken/crazy, her words were very resonant and meaningful. The time jumps were perfectly executed. I don’t know how you did it, much less how you came up with it, but the time jumps fell into perfect composition. I loved this so, so much.