Reviews for Back to Bluewater |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was definitely a nice story. It was really sweet and wasn't filled with all sorts of drama like I thought it would be and I was ecstatic about that. When a story has a lot of drama you can tell they are just fillers and I'm glad you didn't do that. It was a light read for sure and I'll just say I'm glad I choose this to read on Mt phone during a boring class lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() An excellent story, once Roxanne finally opened her eyes and looked at both men with honest eyes. Her fiance wasn't a bad man, just not the right one. I liked the advertising company idea. Roxanne went far away and left everything to find success and fulfillment... and had to return home before she finally discovered what she was looking for. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! I love it! There wasn't all that crazy drama that usually happens, it was just people making decisions that others came to accept. They shall all live happily ever after now!:-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This last chapter took so long that I was beginning to get concerned. "Would the author get bored with the story and abandon it right before the climactic moment?" "Does the author have a cruel streak, leaving us guessing while sitting back and laughing maniacally?" "Will the Redsox go to the playoffs this..." Okay, maybe that last one didn't fit, but I thought that maybe baseball season would be here again before you posted. An exaggeration, of course, so... please... don't use this as an excuse to delay the epilogue... please? I was worried at the beginning of the chapter when it didn't look like she was going home. Thankfully male chauvenist bosses and mitigating circumstances saved the day at last! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since you've told us that the story is almost over I can hope that it isn't too late for Ethan and Scarlet. It took her long enough to see the truth. Then again, a lot of people marry and don't realize the truth until a few years into marraige. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe now that she doesn't feel pushed by everyone she will stop pushing back. But will she stop running away the real question, the only question that matters: Who would I want to spend my whole life with? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please oh please finish this story! I'm not a patient person! |
![]() ![]() How I would like the story to end: Roxanna goes to see Ethan and she tells him her feelings but then he tells her, "You're too late," then slams the door on her |
![]() ![]() Woohoo two updates in two days!? Honestly, I'm surprised this story hasn't gotten more reviews; I'm in love with it! My favourite part of this chapter would have to be the little bonding moment at the end between Roxanna and her mom, it was so sweet, and I'm glad to see Roxanna reconnecting with her family. I just wish she would finally see that Ethan's the right one for her, he's honestly so sweet and he's just better for her than Adrien. Hmm, well she has two more chapters to decide, I guess; I'm interested to see how you'll conclude it in such a short span, I can see this story stretching out for much longer (which of course, I wouldn't mind either). But I suppose all good things come to an end, and I'm excited for your next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be honest, if I was there and her friend I might lock the girl in a rubber room at this point. Loyalty is one thing, but she is being stupid now. It is clear from the past ten chapters that Ethan is the perfect guy for her and that her fiance is a schmuck. Yet at no point so far has she even considered the fact that she might be better off with her hometown love. If this was reality she would at least be entertaining those thoughts and wrestling with them. Instead she seems oblivious. Essentially what I'm saying is that Ethan might be the right guy for her, but the way that this is dragging out I am beginning to wonder if she is the right girl for Ethan. Then again, you have only submitted 14 chapters, so perhaps it is just taking so long for the story that it only seems like months in her world instead of weeks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ethan will NOT let her get away! She can't stay from him if he doesn't let her! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How has this story not got more credit? It's awesome - just the right amounts of angst, romance, drama and humour. Can't wait to read more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Ethan. He is an incredibly patient and good man. Just when things seem to be looking up, Roxanna pulls the rug out from under his feet again. I wonder if he realizes how close to his dream he truly is. She just needs to wake up and see the truth. She'll probably have to return to New York first before she catches on. If she waits too long Ethan will turn elsewhere for love... The plan to finish this before Christmas is a good one. You have my full and enthusiastic support! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For that little bit of drama, Roxanna should realize her feelings for Ethan but then she finds out he has a girlfriend |