|Reviews for Worthless|
| Darth Zannacross chapter 9 . 8/2/2019
And so the birdy car is learning the ropes of the drag life. King seems to have rebound from being dethroned.
Ah, saw a part saying" To kick was dog was wrong", gather you might want to revise that?
Any-who, these cars sound like they would be happier on Cybertron so they would no longer have to hide lol.
So his owner blew his collage funds for a race? That seems...extremely short sited, is this how are hero ends in such a isolated fate?
Firstly, we see King's past, what made him be so bound to cynicism/ nihilism, but things were more upbeat with 52, who despite being a legend takes it with style.
Well, a upbeat conclusion, curious to see how things go from here? Well, looks like its been a while since you resumed this but this is a fun story so hope you finish this one day. Till then keep up the good work and till next time.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 8 . 7/31/2019
Are whimsical hero got a taste of the Fast and the Furious life.
Damn, talk about bitter sweet reunions with Nash not to mention a awkward family encounter, nearly like a awkward episode from that Home Improvement show, at least the dad's not Tim Allen.
Well, King got dethroned but at least he still has his pride.
I don't know about the loyalty thing with Cars King...does not really work when there is no chance it will push back.
Well, we will see what is the aftermath of this victory, till next time.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 6 . 7/29/2019
I see we have some cars that are fatalist about there fate, Optimus Prime and some of the Autobots might not agree with that but, I digress lol.
King is a very humble king, I would rather have him as King as some of the other " Kings" on thrones I suppose.
But damn, Metro is turning out to be a rather racist car, that's one deep scar all right.
Never thought about how moving could be from the Car's side, if they are alive could be traumatic, damn.
Well, not sure how things will go from here but, should be emotional...till next time.
| Starart152 chapter 2 . 7/28/2019
This is a nice chapter where we learn more about two cars personality and life. It is interesting to see their thought about ended up where they are now. The thought process and how their emotions are describe is really nice and interesting.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 5 . 7/27/2019
King...is a very philosophical king. I see Blake is the type to be more motivated, instead of repulsed, by his brother dying vie racing, maybe to honor him?
So, are avian like car is getting a swift introduction to speed racing eh? At least Vin Diesel is not here to make the race fast and furious, oh my.
Even so, was a fun ride and got are wheelie hero to ponder about sentimentality, we will see where it goes.
| Starart152 chapter 1 . 7/27/2019
This is a nice and perfect introduction of the point of view of a mechanical being if it had its own consciousness. It is short but clear of what this will be about and how it fells about the word worthless.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 4 . 7/26/2019
So the muscle is telling the speedy car how things have came to be eh? I seen less awkward explanations, but Nash seems like a rather cool dude.
Metro seems ok to, if a bit hyper lol.
Well, things seem to be going ok for Superbird so far with his owner, but we will see how things go from here and how these " Influences" shape Superbird's destiny.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 3 . 7/25/2019
Ah nice got some more ideas on what these Superbirds are. Road Runners eh? I suppose there former arch enemy cars there the Coyote ? Well, guess they are all dead now so its a moot point.
Well, at least are car shaped hero was given to a kid who loved the art of the car, alas his father is making him feel guilty vie association, that's car racists, arg.
Well, curious to see how things with Blake will go, guess likely it will go tragic but we will see.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 2 . 7/22/2019
Alright, time to dive deep into the depth of worthlessness.
Nearly feels like this could have gone on along side Wally so far lol.
So he's a car that no longer has a glitzy era to thrive in eh? I wonder now if this is a non cannon sequel to Cars eh? Ah well still fun lol.
Well, I wonder if this car is telling his final tale before death or the prelude to the next phase of his life? Guess we will see soon.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 1 . 7/14/2019
Hey there Revamp, amiss wondering around stories I saw this and figured this looked like it could be intense.
While its just a prologue, gives a quick look to the brutal world you have in store. Should be fun, till next time.
| VBoss chapter 9 . 12/3/2018
I know it's been sooo long, but you should really continue the story. I loved it so much. I really wanted to find out what happened. :(
| VBoss chapter 1 . 12/3/2018
Very good story. Well written. I know it's been years since you wrote it, but I really enjoyed it. Sad but realistic, and very creative!
| Tragedy of Light and Dark II chapter 9 . 12/22/2014
Why did I not review this? I read it. Geez, I'm retarded. Oh and Happy New Year! I am giving you my first review of the year on a very deserving story! There's so much going on in this chapter both King and 52 are really interesting characters. I have a question. Will Expresso ever meet or go up against another Superbird?
| Tragedy of Light and Dark II chapter 8 . 12/22/2014
You're great at writing action scenes for races. I love that you make this story so interesting. I'd seriously have a hard time even doing anything like this. Your characters are deep and they lead exciting lives, despite their limitations. That's pretty cool.
| Tragedy of Light and Dark II chapter 7 . 12/22/2014
So much to note here. This chapter talks a lot about life and change, especially the life is a highway theme that you have going on. I also like that King has gotten to be such a deep character. I really like him, so I'd love to know more about him and I can't wait to see their race together.