I feel sorry for King and Metro, especially going by the rules of your universe (which make tons of sense when you look at it from a car's perspective. You really show King's futility here. You also show the prejudice and hate of the world in some ways. This is too interesting for words.

I really like how Superbird learns about the races and is cautious against it being an illegal sport, even though it's a racing type of car. I think, out of all of the cars in this chapter, I really like Phantom. It's seems like it's benn through a lot of hell and it still seems even tempered. I like that.

I also like the comparison between King and Number 52.

I just can't tell you how much I LOVE this story! There is just so much going on in all of your chapters! Even if they are all cars, they still have the same complex emotions as your human (and otherwise) characters. I like that I can really relate to your main character. I can tell how muc different the car was back then versus how it was at the beginning of the story. When I compare XPRESSO to the other cars, it's so innocent. Nash reminds me of a parental figure of sorts. The Cuda is like the wild friend. I do have to say, I rather like the Cuda.

Great chapter so far! I am loving this and the more I read it, the more I love it.

Well, from the point of view of the cars, the crusher is evil, so there you have great display of character's point of view! Oh and I agree that the race car should get his own side story!

This sounds kick ass! I'd love to know where it goes!

52 is a lot more tragic than anyone gives it credit for. I felt really sorry for it, but happy that Blake wanted to come and visit the car. Now it had someone who at least cares.

King has also really seen a lot. Both he and 52 have such stories. They should definitely meet each other on the track sometime..

DA fuq? she didn't steal her own story. Did you not read her bio?

Revamp and Melissa Norvell are the same person. She can't steal what's hers.

I think you stole this story from someone else. I've noticed the exact same story, with the exact same summary, published by someone else on this site, an years before you.

It's also called Worthless, and the penname of the author is Melissa Norvell. The ID of the story is 2848080.

Aw, this was so sweet and inspirational. A moment between two cars. I hope you update this soon! I love it and it's so unique!

Man, poor Kind really took it hard, then again I guess I would too if I was used to winning like he is. Poor guy.

This is a really cool chapter! I love the fact that I get to learn so much along the way and you make it informational too.

I really like the fact that this is told from Xpresso's point of view. I like how he learns things along the way and the whole thing with street racing really makes this story exciting.

I really like King. He's a born to be wild kind of cars. It fits him well.