For some reason I imagine Frank with at least one prosthetic limb - like his leg or something. And he's super short and hobbles around in front of Peter. But his limb makes it easier for him to trip/hook people while fighting so he's more dangerous with it than without it.

Hey, Becca! (if I'm allowed to call you that orz )
I wanted to pop in and say I've just recently finished reading 'Bad Luck' and it was badass and made me squeal a lot.
I love the way you write and your author notes make me grin; basically, I'm glad you were born into this world.
As for 'At the End', I love Frank and wish I was able to act like him in certain situations - like not give a flying f*** about what others think.
I'm not sure whether you stopped this whole FP...business (laughs), but I'd trip over myself 360 if you came back.

Sincerely, just a common fan.

I just found this story and read it all in one go and completely disregarded that I should be asleep at this time. Its such a good fic and every chapter had been written perfectly. I quite like Frank and Peter. Their banter is great even if its mostly Frank being a bit cruel but I think its cuz that's all he knows he doesn't know how to actually care about anyone. I do think Peter is slowly but surely engraving himself into his life and il really excited to see how this story progresses. Please please please don't stop writing this.

Interesting story! I'm hooked on the characters and how they act. I think you really made their personalities vivid and the histories that are being hinted at makes me want to find out what happens next. Can't wait to read more.

I like this story so far. The character development seems wonderful and I really look forward to the next chapter :) I like how Frank was like 'fuck off', but Peter was like 'no' and then following him around, making conversations. It's cute xD Also, at first I thought Frank was a big, muscled bad ass and Peter was this scrawny, small nerd. But then those bullies called him 'midget', and he said Peter was bigger than those bullies, so I was (pleasantly) surprised xD

I think the story title is perfect :]
Also I thought I'd just mention how much I love your character development for Frank so far. You don't rush his backstory or his change from stoic, misunderstood asshole to whatever he's going to become, so his character is so much more believable and the story is well paced.
Also I haven't seen all that much of Paul yet but he seems a lot more fleshed out than the traditional pathetic bullied kid. I like what I see :D
Looking forward to seeing how this story develops :]

Definitely excited for you to post more of this story. It's well written and paced. Some authors make the mistake of rushing the story and the relationships with no character development. I appreciate you not doing that but make sure to pay special attention to not get rushed. It does need a title! Really loving this so far. I can't wait to find out more about frank's past and this mystery boy!

I really like what you've got so far, looking forward to seeing more :)