|Reviews for Early Sunsets Over Monroeville|
| Vael chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
I honestly don't know what to feel for this piece. Horror. Disgust. Love. The story itself is fairly simple, but the relationship between the two is more complex. I was really fascinated by the point of view, like a dual first-person point of view until the end. I think I may have even flinched a little (spoiler incoming) when I realized that she was dead.
It may be worthwhile to embellish the piece more with details regarding the scene and such, but the story is fine as it is. Besides, it would be fairly easy to distract the reader with descriptions that could take away from the story. Overall, I am simultaneously perplexed and impressed with this story.