|Reviews for The Gifted Ones|
| mocha969 chapter 40 . 3/6
so many feels TT
but I'm excited to her about Alice's past!
| deets1 chapter 39 . 2/23
Ha. She is such a tease. Grabs everyone's attention and then just walks away. That is hilarious.
And Mr. Grey. That was the last thing I anticipated. Telepathy man. Scary crap. But the mental to physical reality thing is just freaky, man, I can't wrap my mind around it.
Talking about his extra appendages. Scary. Shit. He'd have to be insa- oh wait he is there we go.
I loved this. Thank you for writing it. I know this review is a bit nonsensical but those are my immediate reactions. I'll probably re-review later
These are such good developments. I have to say you did a really good job of warping everything such that none of it is recognizable-this was the last thing I expected. All of it. Especially the new family snapshot give me back the old family dangit! I'm still so sad about that! WHY?!
I actually cried about that. Well I wept. I didn't sob. But I still cried so you are mean end of story gosh.
Thank you for writing this-so far I have loved it immensely.
| deets1 chapter 27 . 2/23
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT.
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT.
Every ship of mine has been tossed out of the window-
I am So sad right now. I don't even. This is not okay. I'm so sad... And I'll keep reading because darn you this is an awesome story but WHY.
| HyacinthiaPhoenix chapter 39 . 2/19
Great chapter ;)
These normals need to understand, it was great that Alice didn't do it by the book.
Screw keeping them calm, fear is sometimes the best way to do things.
And I sound just like a dictator.
| PixieGypsy chapter 39 . 2/18
That was so cool, I wish I could do that when someone doesn't listen to me. I really like that she just wings it, it's exactly what I would have expected her to do. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Also, thank you for being so good about updating!
| Guest chapter 38 . 2/9
AHHHHHHHHHH YOU DON'T KNOW HOW LONG I WAS WAITING FOR THIS TO HAPPEN AND IT DID AND I'M SO HAPPY YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW
AL AND JONATHAN FOREVER
| PixieGypsy chapter 38 . 2/10
Yes, this is good. I like it :) I can't believe they're together!
| HyacinthiaPhoenix chapter 38 . 2/9
Wow, this is adorable!
I'm so happy they're together now!
| HyacinthiaPhoenix chapter 32 . 2/6
That was a hecka big plot twist!
Great great great job!
| HyacinthiaPhoenix chapter 8 . 2/3
Dat cliffhanger tho!
Jupiter is such a jerk. A really slappable jerk. Dammit I want to kill him. So badly.
| PixieGypsy chapter 37 . 1/30
Yes! I've been waiting for this to happen and it has! I'm so excited!
| mocha969 chapter 37 . 1/29
** yes! she needed to say that! and I never get the references! lol
Reggie's right too lol they SHOULD get married haha
| PixieGypsy chapter 36 . 1/24
This story is so good! These cliffhangers, they're killing me! More please :)
| mocha969 chapter 36 . 1/20
I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!
| PixieGypsy chapter 35 . 1/13
It's awesome! I love the way you describe things, you've got a great writing style. I can't wait for the next chapter!