Reviews for Prompt Me
cvbnjmhjkjhgfv chapter 2 . 9/16/2013
This is perfectly written.
cvbnjmhjkjhgfv chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Quirky and interesting. Well done!
MagicWords chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
This was great! You have a talent for story-telling. Your descriptions were fantastic! I love how you described his eyelashes as 'sooty.' Great imagery!
Elizabeth Clayton chapter 2 . 5/31/2013
LOL i love it! It's exactly that moment of longing dread where damn is about the only word that comes to mind, and there is nothing more you want to do then stare forever at the person without them ever knowing, but at the same time you never want to have feelings for them so you want to bore your eyes out. And they just simply Be, ugh its not fair! This was PERFECTION!
Elizabeth Clayton chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
This is so descriptive! I can see it so clearly! Awesome job!
MagicWords chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
I like it. I mean, this particular woman possesses a lot of mystery. I like the way your narrator perceives her. Every action she made was descriptive and clear. I saw nothing wrong with it. The mystery was there, leaving me wondering. Good work!