Reviews for Peter and Wednesday and the Time Machine
skullanddog chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
I really enjoyed it. :) Quite a beautiful story. I read on your profile page that you have trouble writing fiction, but having read this I'd say you're cured of that. There is a slight bit of funniness with the tenses, as if the story were originally written in present tense and later changed to past tense. However, I think you were grammatically correct on most points, colloquialisms aside, and I cannot fault you at all on spelling and punctuation.
Characters were compelling, especially Wednesday. For a somewhat magic girl, she was entirely charming, and I would read more about her if available - in Peter's company, of course!
Well done, if you'd allow if I'd love to repost this on my writers' blog.
MelancholySilence chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
That was beautiful. Truly, that was touching, sweet, clever, and just all-around perfect. Thank you so much! You are such an amazing friend! I loved the reference to split pea soup. :)