Reviews for Look Away
Kudos chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Fantastic! Absolutely well said.
Eleantris chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
I love this - it directs the responsibility for these kinds of thing towards the right people for once. It's a great partner to Cover My Eyes! :)
tolerate chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I have to say that the law of Saudi Arabia is bullshit. It's not the women's fault at all, actually, it's the men's fault for being animals that only follow their instincts to want what's beautiful and what they can't have. I like how the poem talks about the lust and uncontrolled desires of men and how they should be controlled by others if they can't control it themselves. It's great work, really.
Perisada chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
This is my favorite piece of writing that I have read on this subject. The way you express yourself through abstract imagery that is made terse through your line breaks and rhythm, as well as the way that you directly address the perpetrators in a tone that is bitingly sarcastic make for a controlled fury throughout the piece that is more powerful and more cutting than any rant.