Hey there! :DDD

[Actually, I've thought this {for about for about} fourteen thousand years. ] You have 'for about' typed out twice. :P

At the start, I thought it was such a cool idea to be immortal, but as soon as he met Mandy and made it clear he had feelings for her, I knew things were going to get harsh. D:

I really enjoyed this. It was a good idea. :DDD Like, I just love how sour the idea of living immortal turns by the end of it. It may look awesome at the beginning, but after awhile, it really blows.

I honestly think that if you wanted to, you can expand this out into a bigger thing. I dunno, like expand it . That would be so cool.

But good idea overall! :D

"Because there is no time like the present." Cliche but so cute. XD