|Reviews for The Scandalous Marie Alfonse|
| Veronica Fay chapter 2 . 11/15/2013
HI! Interesting start! I think how she's talking about past events the way she is! It's very different! Great job!
| KaomixRobyn13 chapter 2 . 9/19/2013
i like it, it seems like a good builder. to the charactor in a way of perspective, of course.
but it was pretty good, it should have been longer! it's a really good story though, i like the way you put an odd but yet awesome narrative in the last part, you know, it was pretty cool to read and just gave you an instant image of her mental state. Really cool!
sorry i got to this really late, i got crazy busy, and that doesn't usaully happen a lot for me lol
but i really do like it!
| KaomixRobyn13 chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
this looks like it has some promise! i honestly just love the name of this story though lol
hope you make another chapter! !