cute is all I can say

So I guess this is pretty good, what with having no unnecessary confusion but this is drab and boring.

Romance isn't one of my categories, but this is nicely written, flows well and the characters are more interesting than most I've looked at.

I really enjoyed this story... the promposals were so cute!

I think this story is gold. I go to a public school where things like this happen 24/7. I even have a best friend that is always with her boyfriend, just like the main character's bf. thank you for this story, I love it.

Would everybody calm the fuck down? Oh my god, I swear, why are you getting so upset? You weren't dating the guy! You didn't even like him! You just liked the attention because it was stroking your ego so please stop whining and grow a pair of balls, like Shawn said.

On another note, I love this story!

I really like this story, but I wish you'd stop slutshaming. A girl's sexual activity does not define her, and neither does a guy's.

AWESOME!

I luv the plot!

This chapter was lovely! I'm glad her parents approve of Carson. Her mom was so funny saying that stuff about Shawn. So true to life with the parents embarrassing her. Carson was great about the whole thing. Everything is going so well between them.

You're so good at including all these great, comfortable moments of hanging out with her friends. You can only talk to old friends this way and know they'll still love you. Everything in your story is so realistic. It's like your friend is telling you about her day. Her parents are normal and loving, and would naturally want to meet her boyfriend. Boy, even their text messages to each other are cute!

They continue on as absolutely the cutest couple ever. It was the perfect date for them! I like how you include all the friends. It gives the story a nice balance. Another appearance from Brett! I find him so intriguing. Holly's dad is a riot. It was a great way to end the chapter.

This is the perfect high school romance story. I like the true to life bits of awkwardness between them. They really are the cutest, sweetest couple. As usual, I got a kick out of Riley's attitude. She's a fun personality. I like that Carson puts on a cocky front, but he was a little insecure alone in the locker room.

so i basicly got hooked on this story and i started just after dinner and just finished now at 4:08 in the morning on a school night thanks alot ... but i still loved this story so so so so soooo much..love from Iceland

Ooh, so much drama! Poor Shawn. I'm glad that Holly told him about Chris. Riley had me laughing with the way she talked to Catie. That was a great scene at the end. At least Catie knows now that Shawn likes her. That'll work on her mind. I hope she dumps Chris soon. Things are going great with Holly and Carson. I think she made the right choice, although I really don't know much about Jared.