Reviews for All of a Sudden
U MadeMyLifeComplete chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
I really love this story a heap! I've read all the chapters pretty quickly so please update when you get a chance cause I can't wait to read more and I think I like Carson a lot more than Jarred but I have no clue whether Shawn likes her or not... Guess I'll have to wait and see :)
Hayit'Serenity chapter 5 . 6/6/2013
Woah... That was a pretty intense chapter if you ask me! Update soo please! Hayit'sSerenity
leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 6/6/2013
For having no experience, she seems to be taking a lot in stride: The idea that more than one of the school's hot guys is crazy for her. Two men fighting for her. The fact that she just kissed the boy she was crazy about...

But Carson said that he was usually the single one... I thought that he was a player before? (Have to go back an re-read now)
Hayit'Serenity chapter 4 . 6/5/2013
Ooooh can't wait till tomorrow! ! Update soon please! Hayit'sSerenity
Wolflover08 chapter 4 . 6/5/2013
I love your story, it's really neat and I can't wait to see where it leads! Update soon! :D
leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 6/5/2013
In schools with very serious teams, the team often practices throughout the year. I went to one school with a track team that dominated state every year. Many of the students went on to get full-ride scholarships. Several were training for the Olympics (I moved halfway through the year and never looked it up to find out if they made it). That coach had the team practicing throughout the year, even during other sports... though he did allow some time off occasionally to prevent muscle fatigue injuries.

Lacross can be played indoors (though injuries rise. Baseball... not so much.

As far as her attraction: sometimes a guy (or girl) doesn't notice someone else until others begin to notice. Then it becomes open-hunting season. Perhaps that is the case here.
leavesfallingup chapter 3 . 6/4/2013
Out of curiosity, what did change with Holly? Why is it that all of these guys are suddenly taking note of her when they didn't before? Or did they notice before, but she was oblivious?
Hayit'Serenity chapter 3 . 6/4/2013
Omg this story is actually good and Carson seems like he would be a nice boyfriend! Update soon please! Hayit'sSerenity
HopelessAmbassadress chapter 2 . 6/3/2013
Wonderful, I like it!

I hope you update soon! Don't leave me hanging!
CashmereHerondale chapter 2 . 6/3/2013
Carson is so awesome! He's hot, an athlete AND a genious, simple perfection 3
CashmereHerondale chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
I like your story, you keep the plot simple and it's amusing really, LOL I love Holly she's awesome, keep it up :-)
A chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Wow, this story is really good! Your main character seems very down-to-earth, which I think is very valuable in a literature character. Please update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Keep going! It's good
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