I’m not sure you’ll ever see this but this story was amazing and I hope you continue it someday!
Also- since Sean has to be given an order in person, and he went crazy after Aaron “went to find the bathroom”, that means Aaron is the witch/magi right?

Oh man that was amazing. Good family vibe there (minus the mom).

Love this story. Have it saved to my reading list in safari. That said, please please please continue with it. It's so great because of the realist vibe I get because of the contemporary setting.

This story is pretty amazing. I do hope you get a chance to update soon.

Is nobody going to talk about the "Wolf that disguises himself as part of the herd"? Because that is important too.

The wolf in the herd thing, please don't let it be Lyell. I'm really liking the Elisa Lyell stuff going on, and I'd be really said if it was Lyell. I mean, it's your story, but I'm emotionally invested in this. Love the chapter, love you, and just a lot of love.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I adore Jubee and her lovable rag-tag group of friends.

I love the ending. Shit's about to hit the fan.

Glad for the updates :) Nice work!

I am so happy you updated! I love this story and this chapter was great. You've got lovable characters and an amazing story-line. I absolutely adore Lyell thus far, and I am ultra shipping him and Elisa.

I love this story.
not being a writer myself
I dont have much to say about positive or negative criticism, and thus didnt comment earlier.
The irony begind bannock situation, to have asked the narrator for help in finding the culprit behind sean apparent death, when said beta had been sent to stalk her, and his situation is likely to be from another stalker of her, and probably because of her...
Did jubilee ever try to gain control of her form? since what she lack is mainly experience, and repeated shifting into one form improve the transformation (eg humain : no paralysis, faster effect, less side effect)

I have spent a lot of time reading this today-I really like it. I know I'm pointing lit the obvious but it's such a fun read! Well suspenseful. And I'm shipping. And it's funny. And touching and sad. Jubilee is pretty multifaceted too and it's nice. Brannock-I love his possessiveness. And especially his ability to he infuriating and then supportive teddy bear the next.

Wow. Update soon again!

YAY MORE UPDATES. It's ok that you took so long. A good quality chapter is better than some weird no-sense-whatsoever chapter thrown together in half an hour. As for the chapter, I loved it. You always have an amazing sense of humor, and I have to try not to burst out laughing in class.

excellent. just what the were deserved