|Reviews for Jaded Jealousy|
| Vael chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
I don't think the end is really much of a "twist" like Brianna said. In fact, given the substantial amount of evidence I would say that it was implied fairly quickly in the story. Otherwise, I would say the story is well written in terms of detail and choice of words.
| Brianna18 chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
Wow I love the twist. great job