|Reviews for The Sin-eaters|
| Anon chapter 1 . 2/24/2019
Hey, I wish you had further developed this story.
| Jamie Cambron chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
You have really good foundation for a strong beginning. I really like the detail and feel you put into the story. Yet, I was confused about what was going and think the story could benefit from detail about what is actually happening. For example, the beginning was like astral projection. So letting the reader know that this is an out of body experience a bit more clearly would paint a stronger picture. The end really needs more clarification. I am not sure if he took over the body or if he is controlling him. Or is he maybe looking at the mirror?
Overall, I like it. I really want to know what's going on with this story.
| L.J Heywood chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Very disturbing, and chilling. You keep it somewhat vague yet also describe the transformation in great detail. Keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. You got me hooked. :D