bruh, dis shit was 2 good to end up like dis

This is a great story. Hope that Jack can control his powers and stuff. This kinda reminds me a bit of Teen Woof.(I love the series!) Hope that gou write another great werewolf story! Please continue to write on and surprise us!

I've loved it but I am getting a little bit confused, I hope it all works out though.

Hey, this is a seriously good story.

The first 3 chapters are a bit long winded and probably have deterred some readers. Might be good to re-write them, because this story definitely deserves more readers and more reviews!

Carry on the good work! :-))

I have no clue what to think about people knowing about the wolves. I hope everything turns out okay... After a nice shitstorm though. :3 gotta love that chaos.

I have to agree with the previous review . . . it seems as if your formatting got messed up. This happened to me as well, but it's a simple fix. Otherwise, it looks good!
-RoR

Holy wall of text.

I don't see how your story doesn't have more reviews; it's absolutely incredible. Minus two or three grammar/spelling mistakes throughout the entire story, it's very well-written. The plot is interesting and all the characters are well-devoloped and given more than enough personality. I especially like how the characters react to every situation normally; nothing is forced and the story flows easily. All of the plot twists come at exactly the right times, and I really like the relationship between Jace and Specs.
Well done, and please update soon!
-RoR

Incred. work!

I love your story, but the part at the end where Dr. Scott just kind of appears and enters the conversation quite randomly is a bit off. It's almost like you rushed for the ending of this chapter. Still love the story though, keep writing! :)

I am seriously loving this story and I don't understand why it only has three reviews. The writing is great and I love the characters. Looking forward to reading more!

It's great make more

It's a cool story and all, but the police aren't going to just leave half a body lying around, no matter the circumstances. It would make more sense if Jack was trying to track the beast and maybe look for the rest of the body. But that original finding would be locked in the morgue as soon as it was cleared to move in real life. Otherwise you seem to be doing a good job.

Very well written so far, and Jack sounds interesting...keep up the good work! :)