|Reviews for Systematic Oppression|
| davidseven chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Very nice. I always love a good Haiku, and this one had me thinking. It actually reminds me of one of my own "Golden Noise"
I think I would have like the flow better if the second line had also began "I'm" instead of "I am" which would have also made the beat count even 5-7-5