Reviews for When Skies are Grey
myheart4you chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Omigosh. The feels. During that song part, I started tearing up :')

Ahaha, you got the Marli-in-the-90's-with-braces thing down. Still, I think she could have been even more smart-assy. She reminds me of me. "Hey mom, can I drive?" Because I got my permit way after I should have had my license lol.

"Never have kids, Leeds."

"Never gonna."
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LIAR! Oh, the irony in that. Made me laugh :D

"My respect for you walked out the door the day you fucking did!"

That quote... It just... Wow. That hurt ME, and I'm not even related to them. (Shut up. This family is out there, and they are living this life.)

Your one shots are great. It was really interesting to read from their fathers perspective for so long. I also appreciate the small, realistic things you put in to your stories, such as the braces thing and the talk about the candy bar, telling his son to get something less sugary. For some reason, I like that a lot.

Also, yeah. My assumption as to why he didn't like Seth was pretty much correct.
SoldierofChrist chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
This was a really good story. But will Adam ever come around to Seth?