Reviews for The Irish Boy
Stryder101 chapter 26 . 5/28/2015
Such an amazing story! Brought me to tears :)
altenprano chapter 2 . 4/19/2015
ooooh. I hope that the father's sentiments towards Aiden change, because I have a feeling that your protag is going to play with Aiden whether he likes it or not XD Can't wait to find out.
altenprano chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
I love how you begin this! The narration style that you use is incredible and you work with the first person very well. Keep up the good work :)
Leo jin chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
description of characters╩╗s details, like inner world of characters, is very abundant
FreakinMarisa chapter 20 . 9/2/2014
Noooo! Oh the feels!:'(
MistyWinds21 chapter 20 . 8/29/2014
This literally killed my heart
ScarletD chapter 13 . 8/27/2013
wow, great chapter. I gotta see how this ends! please post soon!
ScarletD chapter 10 . 8/27/2013
wow, very well described and executed. I love the freedom part in the beginning. their conversation (even though it killed me a little inside lol) was perfect and well written, especially with the kiss at the end from Lydia. anyway, nice job!
ScarletD chapter 8 . 8/27/2013
Oh my gosh, such an intense chapter. I can tell im too emotionally invested in this cause im really pissed at Johnny lol. on to the next chapter!
ScarletD chapter 7 . 8/27/2013
Awww poor Aiden! I feel so bad for both of them. that was so sweet of him though, to give her his book of drawings. I liked this chapter a lot, it showed the sensitive side of Aiden. there's still some unanswered questions in this story and im excited to read more :P
ScarletD chapter 5 . 8/27/2013
This was a very sweet and sad, yet interesting chapter. im curious to see how it ties into the story :P
ScarletD chapter 4 . 8/27/2013
aw this was so beautiful! the imagery, and the little moment between them. you went into it perfectly too, the way the main character was just nonchalantly thinking, than simply asked what was on her mind. it was realistic, and so were both of their reactions to the conversation. on to the next chapter! (im kinda hooked now) :P
ScarletD chapter 3 . 8/27/2013
wow, really great chapter :P the beginning was a perfect way to set scene. I love how you write it like the protagonist is telling a story that happened a long time ago. not to mention the descriptions and sentence structure are very good. reading this kinda felt like watching a movie. anyway, awesome job! onto chapter 4 XD
ScarletD chapter 2 . 8/23/2013
good second chapter :) it was interesting seeing her interact with her family, and I can definitely tell by the dynamics that this is the 1940s lol.
i'll read more tomorrow!
ScarletD chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
I love it! this was a great introduction to a story with a good hook. the descriptions were well written and the length of the chapter was perfect. im very curious about the Irish boy :P he sounds cute and I can't wait to see what his personality's like. I love the time period too, I've always been interested in historical writing. anyway, im onto the second chapter XD
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