|Reviews for Make Fun of Me|
| cry of my heart chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Such a gr8 poem, can see all the emotions. Nice one
| Jnet08 chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
I really like this. Being bullied as a child, I relate to it. Keep it up!
| Aeton chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
| Claire LeBoeuf chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Claire here! Just thought I'd drop in with my 2 cents, feel free to disregard, poetry really isn't my thing, so to speak.
I really like this, which is a nice change from the usual shit, pardon my French, that turns up on this site poetry wise. It's got a wonder pattern and rhythm and flows very nicely. The words you use are simplistic, but it works well with the theme.
The only thing I'd say to be wary of is that some of it, particularly the "When I'm silent by choice" bit, can come off a bit self-righteous. You understand what I mean, yeah? I don't think you were intending to, but it can really through off the whole thing when I'm busy mentally griping about how a fuckton of people are quiet by choice.
Good poem, 6.5/10
All the best,