Reviews for Faded in Pleasure |
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![]() ![]() This is so good. and I love the name Levi. I think one of the only things you have to fix is the dialogue. Ex: "Lock the door[,]" I said deeply. There should be a comma after the dialogue if you're going to say, he said or she yelled. But other than that, great job :)) |
![]() ![]() wow um pretty awesome i love the story line but honestly unless it is critical to ur plan I would to see Sophia actually say no to him and stick with it! |
![]() ![]() i like it it good pls update :) |
![]() ![]() Love it! Love it! LOVE IT! I have NOTHING bad to say about this story at all |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read all of your stories and was excited to see you on this site with a new one so I had to check it out. I love it, its a really great story and I can't wait for more. Also I would love to read swac drabbles. |