Reviews for Faded in Pleasure
Addy chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
This is so good. and I love the name Levi. I think one of the only things you have to fix is the dialogue. Ex: "Lock the door[,]" I said deeply. There should be a comma after the dialogue if you're going to say, he said or she yelled. But other than that, great job :))
terri chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
wow um pretty awesome i love the story line but honestly unless it is critical to ur plan I would to see Sophia actually say no to him and stick with it!
ja34 chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
i like it it good pls update :)
Guest chapter 5 . 6/11/2013
Love it! Love it! LOVE IT!
I have NOTHING bad to say about this story at all
Fujiwara Yume chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
I've read all of your stories and was excited to see you on this site with a new one so I had to check it out. I love it, its a really great story and I can't wait for more. Also I would love to read swac drabbles.
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