Reviews for Depths
PenguinCullen06 chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
wow love this, theres a story behind this and id love if you would turn it into a story! :D
JCD5 chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Hey great piece! Very strong! Thanks for a good read! :-)
marianas chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
I love this. Beautiful descriptions :)
Mirutsa Ilayin chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Nicely written. Two notes.

Grammar check:
"How could I leave him when he needed me the most."
Technically a question.

"Go ... Hurry ... Go"
If you wanted the speaker to be ambiguous here, then this is fine. I believe it's "him" speaking, but it could also be the narrator. If you wanted it to be clear, consider clarifying. Otherwise, it's fine.

Thank you for posting this.