|Reviews for You promised not to fall in love with anyone else|
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Oh, wow...You hit it home. Great work!
| myheart4you chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Exactly. It's just... Augh. It's impossible to try and stay together. Nice work :)
| StgMc98 chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
| Luna's Child chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Aww, I can totally understand what the narrator felt. Unfortunately, long distance relationships usually don't work out well, no matter how much the couple wants it to... Anyways, nice work!
| Mirutsa Ilayin chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Clean, concise, and powerful. I like it. No style criticisms.
Quick grammar check, though:
"happier times but eventually we"
Technically a compound sentence, so it needs a comma after "times."
Thank you for posting it.