Reviews for You promised not to fall in love with anyone else
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Oh, wow...You hit it home. Great work!
myheart4you chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Exactly. It's just... Augh. It's impossible to try and stay together. Nice work :)
StgMc98 chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
*Cries*
Luna's Child chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Aww, I can totally understand what the narrator felt. Unfortunately, long distance relationships usually don't work out well, no matter how much the couple wants it to... Anyways, nice work!
Mirutsa Ilayin chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Clean, concise, and powerful. I like it. No style criticisms.

Quick grammar check, though:
"happier times but eventually we"

Technically a compound sentence, so it needs a comma after "times."

Thank you for posting it.
-mirutsa