|Reviews for Darkhawk: Escape From Hades IV|
| J.Logan chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Eh... here I was reminiscing about times gone by, and a figure from those times gone by posts a story here on this site. Coincidence? Or have you trained those latent physic powers in the years since last we met?
Seems an interesting premise. Sci-fi, pirates who still use flintlocks despite the science-y stuff, a witty kid hero who is likely going to be involved in many a wacky adventure.
Only error I spotted one my read-through is thus:
/What mattered was that I him believe he had me where he wanted me/
Other than that, all seems sound.