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still wonder what he'd been about to say about how his brother doesn't eat much. because of the shit storm at home? that would do it, i suppose. i like what's coming up, though. lol thanks for always having something for me to read late at night when i fuck up my sleep cycle by taking naps.

Oh. My. Gosh. Do you even know how good this is? I am in love. Your characters are well-rounded, the plot, thought out, the setting well painted. Wow. Please upload soon.

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Good chapter.

Interesting first chapter that definitely pushed me to want more. Just one little thing, mention that this is a slash in the summary.

"You told a projected image in your heads last night. I was doing other things." ...that made me laugh. their whole interaction made me laugh, near about. still really digging the whole 'breaker' thing now that i know what it is.

me

Really interesting, and a very original idea. Really, continue. I'm enthralled. c;

oh snap. when you said rewrite, you really meant it, and now i'm all excited about this shit but i remember how the other one ended and now i'm somewhat horrified but still as excited. horrited? excified? whatever. really loving it so far, especially as now i get what breakers are and somewhat how the work. good job.