Damn, that story was so intense... but I loved it! X/3

Wow.. Fuck that was quite a ride. This is really good and I like it. I have conflicted feelings about the ending and about Alex as a character though. I do agree with Damien that Alex was fucking cute. I hate the fact that Alex is just a replacement for Aaron. I kind of feel betrayed as well. lol

I'm crying... really...really... HARD

This is legit one of the best in its genre on Fictionpress. I haven't left a review before, but have found myself coming back to it. It's sadistic, but the characters are so real, and though sometimes cringeworthy, it is also very thrilling and unpredictable. I enjoyed the sequel as well, which I won't beg you to finish. Sometimes writers move, and you seem to have a lot of other interesting projects.

This might be one of the best stories I've read on here. Initially I was hoping for a happy ending but as it went on I realised that would have ruined it. It's SO well done, the ending is gut wrenching but absolutely perfect. You know you've read a good story when you feel lost when it's ended and it's not often that happens. Genuinely brilliant albeit heartbreaking. You really did the whole "stockholm syndrome" justice and explained why he would stay and not alert anyone to his disappearance. Amazing story.

Yeah... I really don't know what to say about this story.

Fuck
-As1

My goodness what a ride. Thanks for writing and sharing! I'm a huge fan of this kind of psychological horror/romance. Damien is totally twisted but I couldn't help liking him - he was thoroughly unpredictable. Alex was so weak and helpless and cute; I loved seeing him submit and tremble just as much as Damien.

The ending -! I praise you for the ending.

Anyway, thanks again.

most of the time ive been readibg this ive been humming i hate every thing about you by thtree days grace becuse the lyrics fit so well

please excuse my spelling errors i sm typing ths on my kindle that is so laggy thaf itz nlt eceb funny

Um...this was in no way romance. It's a well written story but is Alex just a kid. It's really sick.

I absolutely love your stories. This chapter of Damien has to be my favorite. Keep that great sadistic imagination going! I also like the way you express your characters' thoughts & motivations.

Oh my Gawd... O.O

No you did not... the end? What happened to 'always happy endings'? T.T

I really love how you did this... instead of starting off 'with' the kidnapping, you let the readers be drawn into it by his memories, I really thought that was cool...

However, I'm too much of a hopeless romantic to have loved this story... it's too bittersweet, but I feel like it's kinda perfect, even though I hate it and just wanna hug the poor baby! DX

It's a sick thought that I've always had, especially with those women just released from captivity in recent years... but I've always thought that victims like in this situation should be thankful they weren't just killed... but after reading this you really put it into a victim's perspective...

I hate this story... but in a strange way I think it's remarkable!

I could never treat my characters like you do, I'm too much of a Mama to do it, it would break my heart...

Thanks for the interesting read!

Best Wishes,

-RPS

Omg... this is so sad! T.T

What should I even say about this? I was surprised? I was surprised that Damien had this obsession with another kid...I wonder what happened to him, and I don't see who Aaron could be. This kind of reminded me of another story (where the kid is kidnapped and the kidnapper basically treats him as a replacement for someone else). Eh...Not sure, it was weird, since it seemed to pop up at the end. Guess it needed too, if it was going to be the breaking point for Alex. I guess that was the only thing that Alex could hang onto, in order not to go crazy and insane.

Alright, this story has to be one my favorite stories ever. It is sad that you don't have many reviews, but sometimes you don't need reviews to know how much of a great writer you are, and how fantastic this story is. This story is messed up, really messed up, god damn it Damien is really fucked up, and then there's Alex who was basically having mixed feelings about everything, and it was so good to see him hate and love Damien. And throughout this whole story, and through everything Damien put Alex through, I cried when Damien died because I knew it would not only haunt Alex that he killed Damien, but he also loved Damien. (Even though he also hated him.) I knew that by you killing him in the story would prove to hurt Alex a lot, as he is definitely hurt in the other story you're writing. It just makes me sad, and I don't know why I am, that Damien is dead. He did all of those sick things to Alex, and treated him like trash at times. But I think Damien wasn't loved right, and even though that shouldn't back up his actions, I still have sympathy for him. And he loved Alex, even if the love is a lot different from normal human love. The look on Damien's face as he was killed, kind of really broke my heart because he was betrayed by the one he loved. Ah, this story was great! I'm going to cry again. I feel so bad for Alex, but hopefully he gets a good end. Though I don't know, with everything that happened. It might not be able to happen.

But who knows besides you, right? :)

I was actually quite sad when Damien died, as messed up as that might seem. I sort of was looking forward to them getting married :'( I'm quite the sadist when reading or watching a movie and I sort of think things could've been 'normal' for Alex sooner or later, but awesome story absolutely loved every minute of it. :)