great story. I would like to read the Lance/O'Connor spinoff

Very much enjoyed. Mushy love story awesomeness, very sweet. : )

Liking it so far

I really enjoyed this. It was very cute with just the right amount of smut. Good job!

Oh yes, please do. Lance and O'Connor would be great to hear about.

I loved this story. I read it in one night because I basically couldn't put it down. I'm literally cross eyed trying to write this review because it's late. Ironically I have a Sleep Workshop to attend tomorrow where I will be advising parents on how to get their children into a good bed time routine whilst I yawn throughout the day because I don't follow my own advice. It was worth staying up to read though and I look forward to reading anything else you have to offer.

DS

I rarely read something that truly makes me laugh out loud, but that bit where Mark's dad explains that he ahs been "seeing" his mom for years was funny. In fact, all of this seemed very light hearted, and even the bitches ditchin' couldn't put a dampener on it really. Lance is such a good friend.

DS

I loved this first chapter, not only because it was long enough to get me into the story without me having to turn the page (metaphorically speaking) but also because it basically introduced what I assume to be all of your characters very effectively, but without seeming bogged down with too much descriptive test.

I really like the interactions between Mark and all of the other characters, and also how you efficiently allowed us to know Mark is blind and what caused it without a boring "history" paragraph. This made the story bounce along and gave it a very light and airy feel.

I have a great respect for someone who can write in a second language, especially English, it's not the easiest of languages to speak let alone write and you write without an accent. Does that sound silly? Well what I mean is that I would never tell this was not your first language, your grammar is excellent. If only others whose language is English, paid as much attention to the structure of their stories.

Love it already, and can I officially file a complaint against Peter "the Prick" Olsen? He is a Prick, and needs to be taken down a peg or too, unless of course he redeems himself in some selfless act of bravery or chivalry in the next chapter. I guess every story has to have a character in it that is disliked and in a few sentences you have given us Peter the Prick. Don't take any notice of him Mark, you are cute as hell.

DS

Good ending. Hope you do the lance / oconnor story soon

It was absolutely great! I loved every aspect of it almost. Though, strangely enough, I loved Lance the most :D He's just a golden guy, seriously. Plus, it was really interesting to read about all the aid that is avaliable there for blind people or those with impaired seeing. I had some idea, but not that much, and it was obvious you had done your research. Plus, the humour throughout was great and I was laughing like crazy at moments!

Loved it!

Jokes were funny and well placed. You did your research about technologies for blind people very well. It was an easy read for me, and went in one go.

Definitely looking forward to your following works.

P.S. Can I have Lance for myself? he is such a cutie! *giggle*

This was really cute! I can't wait to read more stories from you and would love to read a Lance/O'Connor spin off with some Mark/Jake thrown in there as well :)

Maybe I just like sappy romance , I don't know, but I do know that for me this was one of the best stories I read here. I loved the flow of the conversations and the humor :D
I would really, and I mean REALLY want to read about Lance/O'Connor. I love a good and funny "gay for you" romance"! :D
Thank you for this entertaining read :)

I adored this story! I don't review things often but this story was very sweet and original. I would love to read about Lance and his experience to the other side too though. It sounds like it could be steamy! And you have so many wonderful ideas I think I would love to read! I can't wait for them!

Great story! I don't think I could write about having a physical disability and make it so realistic, since I don't have one. You on the other hand, did very well. I'm glad that I found this story!

I enjoyed this story, I think you did really well with writing someone with a disability you don't have yourself. I would be really interested to see a Lance/O'Connor spin-off, that could be fun :)