Reviews for Now See Here! |
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Guest chapter 10 . 8/17/2013 I just love Mark and Jake together! :) |
marginal-utility chapter 10 . 8/17/2013 Great chapter to wrap up the story. |
P.Nutter chapter 10 . 8/17/2013 I really did not want this to end, at all. I freaking loved this story, and these past teen weeks have been an agonizingly brilliant form of torture... You made us wait a week between each chapter, which was the torture part, and then you would go and write a brilliant chapter that would make me forgive you! I love the way you write and your story was amazing, as for writing a spin off with Lance and O'Connor, PLEASE FREAKING DO IT! It would complete my life! Those two are just so sassy and amazing and I cannot live without their banter... Please? Pretty please? Please write that story! I would love you for all eternity... so please? |
Guest chapter 10 . 8/17/2013 Aff's review system is not very satisfactory. Apparently you cannot answer them. |
P.Nutter chapter 9 . 8/10/2013 Literally, the first thing i thought this morning when I woke up was 'What day is it? - Saturday, OMFG NEW CHAPTER OF NOW SEE HERE, SOME ONE TURN THE INTERNET ON!' - no word of a lie... Absolutely loved this chapter! And I love O'Connor and Lance's banter... and is it OK to say I was super glad when they kissed, and pretty much re-read that section over and over again? Because I did. I am seriously intrigued as to where their 'relationship' will go... they both make me laugh so much! Also, Mark is a freakin comic genius my favourite line had to be when he said 'I told you not to lead him on, you've made your bed, now lie in Andrews' I was literally in stitches... And the bit about 'no amount of stretching in the world would save him from being very sore tomorrow'... I took that a completely different way... I am such a perv... I can't believe there is only one chapter left! Like, seriously! Why would you do that?! it would be amazing if you could do a sequel, I don't think I am ready to say goodbye to these characters yet. And this review is now super long... I'm sorry... Cannot wait for next weeks update! XD |
marginal-utility chapter 9 . 8/10/2013 Fun chapter! :) Loved the banter. |
Jester79 chapter 8 . 8/5/2013 Well at least the family was accepting - that makes things easier. I do hate that the same thing is happening to his Mom, no matter how old you are - once you lose something that you've had your entire life will be devastating, it's good that they are practicing and trying to minimize the effects that will be taking place. |
Emodo chapter 8 . 8/3/2013 You planing on makeing any other story when done with this one? makes me sad that it's done soon :( |
marginal-utility chapter 8 . 8/3/2013 Good that an MIT degree is all that is needed to get Mark's parents' approval. :D |
Dawrey chapter 8 . 8/3/2013 This story is just fantastic, everything about it is awesometastic! Mark is so adorable with his puppy face, and I love how you write the story REALLY based on Mark's perspective, nothing is fully described until mark himself discovers it. And I was thinking this girl is definitely from new York because she's practically spot on on everything going on, since I'm from new York. Anyways I'm rambling..awesome story I can't wait for more! |
Jester79 chapter 7 . 7/29/2013 Oh this is gonna be good. Should have known that by not giving him the time of day at work to explain/talk about what was going on between them - that he would show up at the most inconvenient time. Now to introduce to the family, who will arrive momentarily. |
P.Nutter chapter 7 . 7/27/2013 2 things: one, do you take some sort of medication that makes you an amazing writer? if so, please send me a photocopy of your prescription ;) also, I was wandering if you had some sort of handicap that meant you can't update before saturday - if so, I'm sure there is some medication for it! XD Honestly, I am so obsessed and addicted to this story, I re-read it often! XD Good work, I can't wait to read more :D |
marginal-utility chapter 7 . 7/27/2013 If they had gone to Davis with the idea, Davis would have stolen all the credit. |
Error chapter 7 . 7/27/2013 omg I love this story and I love how on time you update w b ohohoho wonder what's gonna happen with Jake har har and please please please...don't make Lance gay OTL Anyways :) always looking forward to the next update :DDD keep up the good work :D |
lulubell97 chapter 6 . 7/26/2013 I love this please update soon it is such a great story! |