| Reviews for Now See Here! |
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   tamzingrace chapter 4 . 7/6/2013 Poor Mark, he's still a bit confused isn't he. But it looks like he's realizing that he may be gay. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. |
| P.Nutter chapter 4 . 7/6/2013 asldklksfjdlsdkhg... Why?! Why would you leave it there! I have to wait a week? No fair :( Absolutely loved this chapter! |
| Nezz chapter 4 . 7/6/2013 My first ever review on fiction press and its to this amazing story! I read it all in one to and I'm so mad at myself for reading it so fast and now I have to wait a whole week for the next part. I just wanna point out a couple parts that I love...Lance and Mark friendship is one of the best things I read. I also like that Mark is fine with his condition and he doesn't let it hinder his life. Last is Jake I think I got a crush on him lol and I'm dying to see what happens next..maybe a small kiss? Please? Lol again this is a brilliant fic and I loved this chapter here. |
| Shiro Yukino chapter 3 . 7/2/2013 This happens to be my first review for Fiction Press and I must say that it happens to be quite the worth for it to be my first. It's a lovely fic with a smooth flowing plot and such creative characters for me imagine and read along with them. Mark sounds really cute and Lance happens to be ,in my opinion, the perfect best friend. Someone who'll always be with you despite the situations but will be there to tease and taunt you. And as for Jake, what can I say he seems just lovely. Sweet to Mark but still rough around the edges to everyone else and the fact that he nicknames other people is soo cute. I'm waiting to read the further chapters to see how Jake and Mark get together so please update soon. |
| P.Nutter chapter 3 . 7/1/2013 Please stay off the Sims 3... I know it is a good game, but this story is too damn good! I love Mark and his relationship with Lance is so funny! Also, Jake is really growing on me! His conversation with Mark made me laugh a lot, especially when Mark said: 'Read my face!' Keep up the good work, can't wait for an update XD |
| marginal-utility chapter 3 . 6/29/2013 Can't blame ppl for thinking they are dating! |
| Terri-ific chapter 3 . 6/28/2013 I have found this story cute and entertaining. Please keep writing! |
| tamzingrace chapter 3 . 6/28/2013 Enjoying the story so far. Looking forward to more. |
| Jester79 chapter 3 . 6/28/2013 Oh - that was awesome! Poor Mark doesn't realize he has an expressive face - being called Pooch - he's still hilarious. |
| Crimson Warrior chapter 3 . 6/28/2013 Awww this story is so cute. I love Mark all flustered at the ending of the chap. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Kibbs chapter 3 . 6/28/2013 Aw they're really cute together. Though I'd probably threaten to rip out someone's spleen if they ever called me Pooch. It's just one of those nicknames that sound so irksome. Anyway, very cute and I'm enjoying their time together greatly. |
| P.Nutter chapter 2 . 6/24/2013 Aww, I have to wait till saturday for an update! No fair! I like this story a lot already, the characters are interesting and seem real. Some of the other 'blind' stories i have read don't keep the characters feeling real... i dont know if that made sense, but yeah! I love Mark! and can't wait for an update ;) |
| Daneeno chapter 1 . 6/16/2013 The story is very realistic so no need to worry! All that research paid off and I'm absolutely in love with the story! |
| loal chapter 1 . 6/15/2013 I love it and I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! |