Whoa, wait, did they all just die? Anyways, I really liked your story, can't wait for your next one, and I hope the ending is as unexpected as this one was. The only thing I have to criticize is how abrupt the ending was. I feel like there was no climax. Also, some questions were left unexplained. Why does Blackblood want to take over the world? Questions like that. But all in all, great story. :)

Whoa, did you write that poem yourself? All those quotes though...I'm amazed at them. Love your use of each. Btw is the Bleach one from the manga/anime?

Ah, so much mystery! If you weren't on the other side of the world, I would be wringing your neck and yelling, "Update! UPDATE!" LOL jk jk, but please, update soon?

Leon is receiving personal training from Frost I see. :) I wish him the best.

Whoo! XD Glad to see you back. :) How've you been?

Anyways, still as good a story as ever. You've really improved over the summer! XD

Hey! XD Missed this story. :) Great chapter as usual. Could be a bit more descriptive, but otherwise, it's fine.

A few very very minor mistakes, but that's it. Cool chapter btw. :) Can't wait for more!

PS Yes, chocolate is very important.

Cool. :) Glad to see this story up again.