Reviews for Senior in the Shadows |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice, maybe try to use a bit more imagery other than that great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The rhyme-scheme is so smooth and unobtrusive I didn't even notice it until the very end. A very youthful poem, I think, in a good way. It relays the paradox of youth that people tend so easily to convey, the confusion and duality. Nice choice of simple, direct words without any over-embelishing that would be unappropriate for this work's tone. Good flow. I wonder why you chose to capitalize all throughout, but I guess I'll never really know. Thanks for dedicating a poem to me (inadvertently). |
![]() ![]() great poem. really sums up the feelings of leaving high school. keep up the good work. class of 2002 rulez! |