|Reviews for Senior in the Shadows|
| Klausfan4life chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
Very nice, maybe try to use a bit more imagery other than that great job.
| Alone in the Desert chapter 1 . 1/13/2003
The rhyme-scheme is so smooth and unobtrusive I didn't even notice it until the very end. A very youthful poem, I think, in a good way. It relays the paradox of youth that people tend so easily to convey, the confusion and duality. Nice choice of simple, direct words without any over-embelishing that would be unappropriate for this work's tone. Good flow. I wonder why you chose to capitalize all throughout, but I guess I'll never really know.
Thanks for dedicating a poem to me (inadvertently).
| Allison chapter 1 . 10/6/2001
great poem. really sums up the feelings of leaving high school. keep up the good work. class of 2002 rulez!