|Reviews for Object in Mirror Are Closer Than They Appear
| Luna's Child chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Another interesting story. You certainly have a talent for writing horror as my eyes were always glued to the screen and I was wondering what would happen next. Nice work.
| LiteraryTerp chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
I've never imagined that a story could be in first person, present tense without sounding ridiculous, but in this case you pulled it off; the sense of anticipation and uncertainty called for it.
The ending seems to clash with what the story was about. At first I thought it was about a man whose intrapersonal demons are physically manifesting around him but it's all in his mind. But the ending turns off in a different direction with a strange phenomenon that morbidly takes a man's life.
But still, a well-written story.