Reviews for Outcast
SevvyGirl chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Wow, I've felt like that a lot. Not so much people stopping what they're doing when they see me coming, just more so that they're not going to pay me any attention or let me play. They'll act as if I'm not there...
I really like your poem's truthful, because even though people at school may dislike you, surely there's one person out there that loves you, and even if there isn't, God does. So yeah, I like the rhyme scheme and just everything about it. Really inspirational actually...
MethodlessMadness chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Rhyming too! Whoa! This was very good! Although you could do without the (stanzas) interjected throughout, and just leave it as the double spaced paragraph it is. :)
Molly 3 chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
Yeah, okay, well. This is basically my life, so thank you for this. My favorite. 3