Reviews for Protecting a Prince
Guest chapter 10 . 5/29/2018
U better put Colton and Avalon together after all this
Guest chapter 23 . 7/19/2015
annie chapter 23 . 3/1/2015
Hi chelsea
I just love what ever u might nt belve me i almost read breaking giselle 18 times hope u write about each character including the character lionel his story is hidden hoping good frm u bab bye
Carmel March chapter 23 . 6/4/2014
Oh my goodness, that was amazing. I'm so happy with how this story ended. It was sweet and gave a sense of closure with these characters. Thank you so much for writing this, and I'll definitely read any stories about other members of this family! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
I didn't know americans called their parents mother, father I thought the ancient people called it. Im american, I call my parents mom and dad.
TMSantos chapter 23 . 5/26/2014
I feared a tragedy. I am glad it's a happy ending!
Princess chapter 23 . 5/23/2014
Do a story for Beau and Felicity..
Beautifully Musical chapter 23 . 5/24/2014
Oh God, it's done... D:
Wendy Thompson135th chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
The children, all of them, are well drawn children, but the parents and other adults seem like children playing grown-up. The twelve-year-olds I know speak just like these three, but the adults I know have a larger vocabulary and a different mind set. Parents, usually adults; and sovereigns, of any age, are often more long-thinking than children are. Children are usually very in the moment: I want it NOW. Responsible adults can look beyond the current moment to the consequences the child cannot see. None of the depicted adults ring true.

Far too much telling and not enough showing; the narrative seems cluttered with too many modifiers in general and way too many synonyms for 'say'.

My own taste is for less head-hopping and more concentration on a single POV, but other readers may not mind or even notice.

The writing skills are excellent and this was a most enjoyable presentation.
xandria11 chapter 23 . 5/24/2014
Haha! Nice ending! Didn't expect it. :)
xandria11 chapter 22 . 5/23/2014
Awe! I hope she could forgive Beau. :(
Anyways, please update soon! :)
Carmel March chapter 22 . 5/20/2014
I was so excited to see this update, and it certainly didn't disappoint! I loved, loved, loved this chapter and how you ended things with Avalon and Colton. So sweet! I'm really looking forward to the epilogue! :)
TMSantos chapter 22 . 5/19/2014
OMG I cannot believe this is done! (Well there is still an epilogue...)
I smiled when Jayden replied about the media. Go king! :D
zaini chapter 22 . 5/19/2014
Marvelous! I hope you write another series relative to this family. Perhaps of some other sibling. Loved Avalon's kickass nature and Colton's unwavering love for her.
Commending you on a bang up job!
dragontamer155 chapter 21 . 5/11/2014
HOLY MOTHER-FUCKING SHEETROCK! YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING! Infertility?! You monster, nooooooooo not Ava! Shit, Chel, I don't know whether to kill you for being such a crap-sack or hug you for being such a great writer.
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