|Reviews for The Creature|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2018
I love this story
| MissCheshire chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
I know this was written a while ago but I just wanted to write a quick review. There were a lot in the story that was never really explained and I feel this could have been an awesome suspense story if you fleshed it out a little bit more. Some parts were drawn out a little too much and some were skipped too fast. But I absolutely loved the concluding sentence.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
Ok this is a great story but why are there two 16 year olds the only ones left in the whole town? WHY?.?
| ravenlover101 chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
You wrote this? the ending is a total surprise for you I love it it is better than the other story is so far but i still like the other one a lot
| Clare B chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Ok so I read this at midnight and it definitely gave me shivers! There were great descriptions and a fantastically creepy storyline! My only suggestions would be to reword the last sentence in paragraph one and second to last sentence in paragraph seven. Other than that, this story was great! Thank you vampireauthor! Your stories are always amazing!
By the way, I think suspense does fit for the category. :)