Great story. Had some interesting fairytales weaved in. Thank you for sharing.

Just a heads up - the last chapter, you mentioned the glass slippers as if they hadn't been brought up since she first lost the one - however, he also gave them to her when they married. Maybe I misunderstood, but it might be something to look at and update with your changes.

I love this story - very creative, and I love the character development. It could be very lighthearted at some points, and very dark and real at others; you did an awesome job balancing it. Great story!

Not just grammar, but also vocabulary. Let me know if you still need a beta.

After that, WE NEED A SEQUEL!

The story is ok, but it would have been a lot better if there weren't so many spelling/grammar mistakes.

Your spamposting is a violation of two rules on this site - you're not allowed to post chapters which are nothing but announcements with no story content, and also you have made duplicates of this post across several stories. This is a violation of Fictionpress standards, and you have three days to remove these posts before I report you to the website for breaking these rules. I've had to report several others this week for the same rulebreaking... when you signed up for this website, you were required to read the rules. I suggest you do so again.

I recently came across this story a few days ago, and it has taken me that long to read (and enjoy) it. It is a creative and intriguing story, and I was surprised (and saddened) when I came across this author's note. I'm sorry for what you're going through, just as anyone else who has recently commented on your stories is.

That said, I just wanted to warn you that 'chapters' like this are a violation of the rules of this website. You are not supposed to post chapters that have no story in them. My friend posted a similar announcement on a couple of her stories when real-life events impeded her time and ability to write for several months. Her stories that had her notice got deleted, and I am sure you don't want the same happening to you, to have your stories and reviews deleted. I would suggest you move this information to your profile and delete this chapter, so as to not risk getting in trouble with the mods. My friend's account wasn't deleted, but she lost a good amount of reviews and the story itself. I would hate to see such a thing happen to you, as this story was very enjoyable.

I truly am sorry to hear you're going through such a difficult time. I hope you will find peace and strength these next few weeks, months. Although I'm sorry that you're stories will go on hiatus. I onderstand and respect your wishes. (Just hope to read the end of your royal vampire story, so in love with it ;) ) know that there are a lot of people who mean the best with you! Best of luck!

I'm so sorry this is happening to you! You need to do what is best for you though. I understand why you made your decision. I hope you start to feel better and stop hurting yourself. She is not worth the even the words you write about her, but its hard to overcome the pain and fear of the things she is doing and has done.

You should consider revising this story. I had to work really hard to get over some major grammatical errors. I almost gave up.

Congratulations on finishing the story! Or the first book in it rather-it seems we'll be following Atropos in the future.

Thanks again for taking the time to write and share this wonderful story with us. I can't wait to see it again in published form. :)

Dear goodness you scared me there for a moment

I laughed at the part when Adrian said that he didn't want women to be thrown at him literally. For some reason, I imagine women flying and tackling him xD

Awwwwwww. The last sentence simply tugged at my heart strings

Adrian is wonderful :)
The way he manipulates people is fascinating