Reviews for White Star Fallen
Sabi2 chapter 5 . 3/31/2014
Nice chapter! 8 hope you are able to update again soon!
ezonad chapter 5 . 3/17/2014
Pirates and Avaians? Lots of fun. I look forward to reading more of this. I'm definitely enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work.

Kate Jackson chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
I loved the White Star Falling! You truly are gifted and honestly I'm egging for the second chapter. It was exciting and adventurous, with a concept that was original and truly interesting. The way this was created truly had you falling and reeling in confusion just like Kyla. The snippet of the world we were given is obviously vast and fantastical, with creatures that would entice anybody. Reactions were rational and real, giving Kyla a relatable and definitely likeable quality. Very excited to discover what Kyla wakes up too!
ColleenScholes chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
Calcordia chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
Love it so far! The idea is unique, and all the terminology is great.
ColleenScholes chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Very entertaining, looking forward to the next chapter.